Review: Reviewed by Ray Simmons for Readers’ Favorite.

You have to pay attention to this one. Virtual Quantum Collapse by

Lutz Bartz is definitely not a quick read. And, as the name suggests,

it is not a particularly easy read, especially for those not up on their

quantum physics. But with its exciting and gifted three main

characters/agents and their potentially universe-saving mission,

Virtual Quantum Collapse is a very satisfying and exciting hard

science fiction novel in the vein of works by authors like Neil

Stephenson. If you love his works, you will like Lutz Bartz. I am not

a scientist nor do I have a scientific educational background. I am

simply a huge science fiction fan who appreciates when the science

and ideas are accurate, challenging, exciting, and very well written.

You get all of that in Virtual Quantum Collapse, and more.

Hard science fiction books like Virtual Quantum Collapse usually

start out very slowly. You have to set things up so that the reader

can appreciate the fictional world you have created for them. Lutz

Bartz does this beautifully at the beginning of Virtual Quantum

Collapse, and he does it well. We start on Andromeda Station Three

and this is a mission briefing. A briefing for a mission bigger than

any I can recall in any novel I have read so far. This introduces us to

some of the most capable agents in the history of science fiction

and the fact that all three are women added tremendously to the

desire to see what happens next. The more you read, the more the

human element and consequences come into play as the stakes

start rising. A pretty good formula for success. A great work, all in

all.

Review: Reviewed by K.C. Finn for Readers’ Favorite

Virtual Quantum Collapse is a lengthy and deeply complex work of

science fiction penned by author Lutz Barz. This sweeping novel

tells the tale of the history of different galaxies, planets, and the

races which live in them. In the Great Attractor, the original species

Prima and their more primitively cultured twin Regum fall into

unrest after the shocking discovery and later murder of an

astronomer. From here, a cataclysmic chain of events begins,

including suicides, scientific missions, disappearing people and a

gigantic interplanetary war which is sure to wipe out millions. The

question is which planets will survive the devastation and rise again

to power?

This is an extensive and intense read which hardcore fans of

science fiction are sure to get into and relish every detail. For my

part, author Lutz Barz writes with such an intimate and automatic

knowledge of his creation that I occasionally found myself referring

back to find out what was going on, but as the epic plotline

progresses, so does your understanding of the many people

involved in the relations between Prima and Regum, and later other

planets too. The end result is truly epic in proportions, both

shocking and satisfying to come to after such a huge, high stakes

adventure tale. Overall, Virtual Quantum Collapse is sure to leave

the hardest science fiction fans amazed by its technical prowess,

political sensibilities and atmospheric depictions of the different

levels of conflict. Recommended for those brave enough to take on

the epic reading challenge.

Review: Reviewed by Rabia Tanveer for Readers’ Favorite

Virtual Quantum Collapse by Lutz Barz is a science fiction novel set

in a galaxy much like ours but in other ways very different. Set in a

super galaxy with just two planets, two races are constantly vying

for dominance. Prima and Regum are home to people who are

highly technologically advanced, with a deep sense of loyalty to

their respective planets. Prima is claustrophobic; some of its people

want to break away from the shackles and take refuge in Regum.

Enraged and power-hungry, Prima wants nothing more than to

capture Regum for its own. However, they have found Earth,

populated by a race they believe is nothing more than barbarians

hell-bent on spilling blood. But they still want it and they want to

claim it. It is a tussle between two very powerful planets that have

weapons and intelligence of their own and there is only one Earth.

Who will get to own it?

Virtual Quantum Collapse is a fast-paced science fiction novel that

contains two very realistic alien planets. I have to admit, I thought

there would be too many characters with difficult names and I

wouldn’t be able to keep up with the story. The novel has multiple

characters with difficult names, but they are very well constructed

and developed. They have their own charms and their own quirks

which make them relatable. The story itself is very complex, which

the fan of science fiction will really enjoy. The author smoothly

transitions from one character to the other, from one storyline to

the other, and ensures that the reader is with them all the way until

the end.

Reviewed by Christian Sia for Readers’ Favorite

It is always very easy to write a quick summary of a simple

narrative with a straightforward plot and a single, well-defined

protagonist, but not for a long novel that transports readers into

space, following characters and agents through an interplanetary

conflict and exploring quantum physics. First off, the language is

complex, at times very technical, and it is loaded with scientific

concepts. Virtual Quantum Collapse by Lutz Barz is colossal; a novel

featuring a super-power galaxy and beings of exceptional abilities

and qualities. In a theocracy in the galaxy, Prima will do anything to

subdue its twin race, Regum, and Earth using the psychic

visionaries located in space. With Regum’s nano-technology

growing exponentially, Prima uses the psychic abilities to get what

they need. But what awaits Earth is even more dangerous and

powerful. Readers are pulled into a world where quantum physics

rule and where artificial intelligence is highly developed, with a lot

of controversial conflicts between the planets.

Here is a book for those who enjoy a complex novel, and it is only

fair to warn the reader that it will be not only a lengthy read but

one that is mind-boggling. The vocabulary is rich, and it is tailored

for readers who enjoy scientific terminology; there is verbosity in

expression, but there is fast pacing that mimics the intensity of the

activities in space. Following exceptional agents, especially the

women in Regum who hide their brains for fear of psychic attacks

from Prima, is fun. The setting is no place like Earth and readers

may have to create whole new images in their minds as they read. I

enjoyed the use of neologisms, referring to completely new

scientific concepts. The descriptions are terrific and they highlight

Lutz Barz’s narrative style. Virtual Quantum Collapse isn’t a quick

read. It is a long and enjoyable ride through the galaxy and what

makes it stand out.

 

Review: Reviewed by Liz Konkel for Readers’ Favorite

Virtual Quantum Collapse by Lutz Barz is an epic science fiction tale

full of action-packed moments, adventure, danger, and space

exploration. Ung is one of three agents at the Arktus space station

and each is tasked with their own mission. As Ung ventures into

Prima’s space, Ratze connects to the Discrepancy and a Primaian

agent attempts to recruit Nervina. Elsewhere, Mena is drawn

toward the Discrepancy while Carias is sent to an asylum and

recruited to look into the WebWorld politics. As their paths all cross

and missions shift, Prima has plans for domination and they aren’t

stopping at the planet while Mars faces a crisis which could halt the

Reganian mission.

Lutz Barz weaves through various perspectives to deliver a well-

rounded story where everyone has a mission or agenda that will

have consequences for various civilizations. Ung’s story begins with

her at the space station as an agent who embarks on a journey

that’s filled with excitement and danger in her decision to join the

DVs, and even a little romance through a briefly met relationship.

She goes through several ups and down which Barz uses to show

Ung time and again acting as a hero who helps others. The other

agents she works alongside play a significant role in events as each

of them has their own arc and personal journey. Barz gives each

character their own place in the story which allows for you to get to

know each of them A conspiracy element is woven throughout,

primarily at the asylum and through the use of experiments.

Barz delivers a series of challenges for each to face which centers

around space, planets, and technology. Carias’ side of the story

focuses on her search into the WebWorld and the startling truths

she uncovers at the asylum which leads her story toward a tragic

turn of events. Mena is training underneath Niata and her journey

pushes her against her limits to who she’s meant to be. Everyone’s

story overlaps as their journeys connect to the core of the story

which is Prima and the impact the civilization has. Several other

perspectives are seen that give a new aspect to the plot and show a

different side to how events unfold. Barz incorporates various

science fiction elements such as an alien field, BrainDraining,

Holographic pictures, AI, and much more that give a vivid society of

technology. Virtual Quantum Collapse is ideal for lovers of science

fiction and epic adventures with detailed characters, advanced

technology, and surprising turns.

Review: Reviewed by Ruffina Oserio for Readers’ Favorite

Virtual Quantum Collapse by Lutz Barz is a science fiction novel of

huge cosmic proportions, a story that takes place in a world far

larger than ours and that presents scientific phenomena that evoke

primal energy. At the center of the story is the Great Attractor, the

galaxy that has existed before the Earth and within which are found

two planets, Prima and her twin planet Regum. The reader is

introduced to unique species, to alien technology and the fight for

power amongst powerful races. Scientists are setting up stations in

a world that is utterly strange and genuinely horrifying to explore.

There is a lot in this story; alien conspiracy, the clash of

technologies and a threat to Earth, considered by the Primarians as

a race that is self-destructive. In this narrative, the forces clash

against each other and planets compete in intelligence. When the

conflict climaxes, which of the superior races will take control over

the others?

This is a huge story, filled with many subplots. At times it feels like

one is reading many novels in one, but the subplots create a great

sense of suspense. The author does an incredible job in

constructing a universe that is punctuated by conflict. It’s a

universe that can be easily imagined with the elements of the

galaxy captured in descriptions that allow vivid imagery. The focus

on the settings is very noticeable and the worlds the author creates

are filled with intelligence. The world-building is unique and the

phraseology uncommon, with stand-alone words and short phrases

that make for a unique and dramatic reading experience. Virtual

Quantum Collapse is patiently and cunningly plotted, reflecting the

ingenuity and the storytelling gift of the author. It’s interesting and

filled with adventure, the kind of work that is replete with exciting

images and scientific concepts.

7 years ago

Ray

You have to pay attention to this one. With over 3300 pages, Virtual Quantum Collapse by Lutz Bartz is definitely not a quick read. And as the name suggests it is not a particularly easy read, especially for those not up on their quantum physics. But with its three exciting and gifted three main character/agents and their potentially universe saving mission Virtual Quantum Collapse is a very satisfying and exciting hard science novel in the vein of works by authors like Neil Stephenson. If you love his works you will like Lutz Bartz. I am not a scientist nor do a have a scientific educational background. I am simply a huge science-fiction fan who appreciates when the science and ideas are accurate, challenging, exciting, and very well written. You get all of that in Virtual Quantum Collapse…and more. Hard science=fiction like Virtual Quantum Collapse usually start out very slow. You have to set things up so that the reader can appreciate the fictional world you have created for them. Lutz Bartz does this beautifully at the beginning of Virtual Quantum Collapse ad he does it well. We start on Andromeda Station Three and this is a mission briefing. A briefing for a mission bigger than any I can recall in any novel I have read so far. This introduces us to some of the most capable agents in the history of science fiction and the fact that all three are women added tremendously to the desire to see what happens next. The more you read, the more the human element and consequences come into play as well as the stakes rising. A pretty good formula for success.

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Periods not needed after chapter titles. The use of jargon, short incomplete sentences, multiple adjectives and one-word sentences is disruptive to the narrative and difficult to read. The first chapter appears to have been n the voice of an AI and has technology jargon and equations making it hard to read and doesn’t link to the beginning of the rest of the story.